Feature Story Peer Review

#1 Sami
1. The purpose for writing is to get a personal firsthand take on world war II.
2. The writer's main point in these questions is asking how it felt to be in the war and experience it.
3. The question that interested me the most was "What made you want to be in the war?" because it's always interesting to know what makes a person want to be engaged in that sort of violence.
4. Nowhere
5. No


#2 Elizabeth
1. The purpose for writing is to show what life was like having a parent in the military and living on an army base.
2. The writer's main point in these questions is asking how is living on an army base different than living in a regular neighborhood.
3. The question that interested me the most was "What life skills did you learn on the base?" because things are done differently.
4. Nowhere
5. No


#3 Amanda
1. The purpose for writing is to inform the reader about the ups and downs of working in a hotel.
2. The writer's main point in these questions is asking what does the subject like about working in the hotel business and why.
3. The question that interested me the most was "What is the strangest experience you've had while working?" because that would be a funny story.
4. More detail on the question "What is the most difficult decision you've had to make?" because at first I didn't know if it was going off of the previous questions or if it was just a general question.
5. No

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